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Very very good! I'm guessing that you're playing the violin, which was excellent in all its dips and gliss. The instruments were all handled with such realism I really can't believe how well that was executed. The voices gave a nice touch, but the violin really did keep the whole piece going. A couple of things I thought could make this better...its instrumentation was empty to me. The drums were soft - soft - soft - then a little bit heavier - then back to that soft. In general, that's how the song flowed. Not many big changes, just a kind of drone. I also thought the melodic lines could have been more concrete to make the piece stand out and that a little bit more reverb on things would make the song more mystical. But overall, I have to say this is outstanding. A wonderful addition of world music to a monotonous list of the same old same old. Fantastic job!

Cool! Videogameish 8-bit with many twists. Really nice melody that catches on. The dramatic change at 01:22 caught me off guard...at first wasn't sure if I liked it, but it got to me eventually. Ahhh yes especially since now I hear it's like a segue into the melody's key change. Very nice and creative. The ending made me smile with the filter sweeping that last note into the echoing void ha. I really like this, great job!

Mawnz responds:

Thank you very much :D I too was sceptical at first regarding the change at 01:22, but the song needed a little variation ^^ Thank you again for listening and for the very creative review!

ANT POINTERS! I love you.

Synthapse responds:

Awwww thx man!

OhhhHHHHH. Sexy. Nice range. Generic guitar+guy, but changed up a little in the chorus with the marimbly xylophonic things...oh and pizzis how cheerful. Why isn't this a full song?! Your mixing is great, balanced, and fair. Just need to get on with it and write out a nice little bridge and a come-together final chorus. Yep, nice job!

Michael-Flaherty responds:

Yeah, I'm a little self conscious when it comes to my vocals, so maybe that's why I didn't invest my efforts into a full song, but thanks for your kind words. I suppose I could throw a quick bridge in there, that wouldn't be too hard. Thanks a for the comments!

Looovely waltzzz!!!! Such wonderful obscurity in this neat melody. Would have been nice if it had not just faded out at the end, but I loved the instrumentation and the rhythms anyways. Obviously could be worked on more in the writing aspect, since you did just let it kinda die at the end. Anyways, what a great song. I can't resist a waltz.

bluelephan2 responds:

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Why do you need tips? (Unless you mean like money tips, which I won't give anyways) I literally thought the beginning rumble was a helicopter about to intersect my house and I got scared. You guys are soooo lovely as always. Stupendous creep techno house. I just sneezed. Much love <3

Synthapse responds:

thanks man!

Very dark ambient. Definitely felt the molecular level of a silver helix at 2:55. I like its softcore hardcore quality, reminds me of Silent Hill boss fights. The collective of your music reminds me of múm. A few iffy things...the beginning, which I loved, was not connected to the beginning that was actually connected to the rest of the song. If it was more so, I think that would have been more enjoyable. Also the looping quality was not present, it was a standalone song. Just a few minor things, but the use of the cavern atmosphere and especially the choirs really stood out for me. This would serve a great suspenseful purpose in the background of some horrific videogame event. I really do see something Silent Hill...running from a violently twitching flesh creature wearing a dirty angel costume. Its quickly gliding along the ground at you while you're darting through the hallways of a gigantic ruined chapel. You find a metal crosier on the ground and manage to beat the creature to death, but you turn around to find five more rushing to get you. Anyways, it's an honor to be dedicated too! Thanks for that and for making this neat darkness song!

EnigmaticWolf responds:

That's one of my musical strategies. When I compose dark music, I kill off the absolute beauty in exchange for a bloody chaotic musical purgatory. The beginning was intentional, in a way that I could explain by asking you to envision someone stepping into the graveyard next to the chapel before they enter it. As soon as they stepped into what appeared to be a beautiful place, their reality is met with certain doom.

I'm not sure, though. When I composed this song, I DIDN'T want any long-lasting beauty. I wanted a mix of darkness and light, but mostly darkness. The beginning was a very short introduction into a whirlpool of madness, I think.

Moreover, thank you for your review! I always enjoy your imagination and attitude. Cheers, brother. Until then.

If you haven't already, I've uploaded the best quality on a Youtube account. The atmosphere is not only greater, but it's accompanied by a picture that will give you an idea what was on my mind, and why the introduction isn't what you expected it to be. Extending the introduction would be like extending ''I'm A Barbie Girl''. It would be utterly annoying - period. Here is why, this is the song that inspired me: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=65rtecdTS3o (Listen to this. You would surely change your mind about the introduction, I am almost certain.) Now, I accept criticism, but I take criticism into consideration before I take the criticism. <3

Lastly, I made it a loop so people don't have to keep pressing the play button. I always do this.

First of all, it is so adorable that you and OcularNebula are buds. I was going to say that this sounds like something in his realm, but I researched!!! I'm really really digging the melody and how melodious it is. The way it progresses so effortlessly and how it's so different and interesting. The instrumentation seemed the same yet always sounded like it was changing, the very soft beat is an excellent choice, and I don't think the whistle sound was overused. I think you two create a whole new genre, in my opinion. You experiment with electronically unconventional melodies and time signatures, yet keep an appealing aspect to it...I mean with these kind of pieces that are quirky, which I loooove. The only thing off with me was the ending, its abruptness was a little disappointing to me. Anyways, glad to have noticed you, gonna favorite youuu BYE.

Synthapse responds:

Thanks for the love bro! Me and ocular are a pretty cool team!

Just an awkward clown that showed up late to the clown pile. I love to provide goofy-spook music but I'm open to anyone that challenges my comfort zone. Send me details of your lifestory when you get the chance!

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