VAC 11 Judge Review:
It was a little awkward when the Ape Man appeared and I wasn’t sure what actions were going on as he grunted hahahahaha, but I assumed they were just stalking from a distance? I wasn’t sure who exactly appeared at the end to evacuate their guts or the other one with him. Nice grandpa character, but the others didn’t seem quite as defined as his. Great mixing and sound effects with some low ambient music. The plot was okay, but it seemed a little rushed for what it was. I would have liked to learn more about the feelings of these characters, maybe that contributes to why most of them didn’t seem as defined, since grandpa spoke the most. Overall, a good piece that I think needs more attention to character detail and some extra plot development. Good job!